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Out alone in the winter rain (Other) by Prince of Void Out alone in the winter rain
Sadness is high there, sky is down
I remember those tears had hidden
Behind drops of rain
Iâm still crying in the rain
And all memories pour down
Inside consuming-pains
I have been one no dwelling could contain
Iâm a passion to the close of a day
Iâm making the profile of a day
To express the portrait of the sun-ray
In this poem I could explain
What I obtain
What I lose again
I explain her eyes in heavens
And the painâs dissolving within
The despairâs getting frames of her faces
In the evening rain
How earth and I was in vain
Could you explain it to me in the rain?
Why I lost her in the sigh of solo pains
The agony never spares me again
Up the ladder:
A touch so real
Down the ladder:
The Mirror
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Posted: February 7, 2007 9:47 AM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2007 9:47 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9286 Comments:
Saw a film about John Callahan, the cartoonist. He writes beautiful songs too - he's also a very good cure for the inflatable kind of self-pity you're exposing here.
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Out alone in the winter rain
Happiness is high there, sky is up
I remember those tears of joy had hidden
Behind drops of rain
Iâm still singing in the rain
And all memories flow upward
Inside consuming bliss.
Cheers