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HIGHER (Free verse) by Radiation
I'm almost there I can see the gate awaiting me. Then I remember all the
lies and torments I had provoked the people in my life, and I start
falling...
I'm rising again. I can see the halos shinning so bright. Then I start
to hink about all the sins I've done and commited. I'm starting to fall
again...
I'm going up once again. I can see the big, beautiful clouds awaiting
to be seen trough. Then I think to myself, Am I worthy enough to go into
Heaven?
I start falling again this time faster. All I can do is pray and hope
that...
Before I can do anymore, I knew were i was. There was no more laughs,
no more light, no more anything.
I knew where I was now, theres no more I can do...
I'm in hell and this is my eternal afterlife!
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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11443
Posted: January 30, 2007 8:05 PM PST; Last modified: January 30, 2007 8:05 PM PST
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