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Illusion (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Were you a rose I would but glance And take you for a nettle Surely I would touch Your breath and Know you as a kettle I'd stay the heat To watch you boil And bear your stings To feel you coil Never more will I become Your harbinger in red A poisoned dream in black and white All nestled in your head

Up the ladder: Eden
Down the ladder: THE ABYSS

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10941
Posted: November 30, 2006 1:57 PM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2006 1:57 PM PST
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