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sleep (Haiku) by nentwined satin-lidded eyes
close to let the mind open,
staring deep inside
Up the ladder:
A Thing I Must Do
Down the ladder:
8 or 9
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Posted: November 29, 2006 7:58 AM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2006 7:58 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.111111 Overall Rank: 1112 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.36.162
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30-Nov-06/9:16 PM
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good point
What utter nonsense, if you didn't own this site you would not get half the tens you get. That is utter bum sweat.
Weep (Haipoo) by Ranger
Satan's brownly bow'ls Squeeze to let the bum open Nothing much appears
Satan's lonely jow'ls
Sag, a calme before the storme Of concentration
Santa's awful howls
fill the porcelain valley as red becomes browne
Probably if I didn't own the site, I wouldn't have been the "vitim" of 0-wars and 10-wars, so likely true.
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