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Improvisation (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Where will my hand end?
At the fingers?
On the page?
Will the words continue
In lieu of context?
Will they spill?
Purely rhetorical.
It's your mind on a string
Dangling out
A gnat from flame.
Here are forever guesses
As yesterday's tomorrow
Is a brilliant today
And will we be heroes?
Or demons?
Or ghosts?
The end is a far off sight
With orange groves
And a splendid path
That winds its way back.
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Weighted score: 4.9525743
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Posted: November 17, 2006 4:31 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2006 4:32 PM PST
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