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tormented suspicion (Free verse) by pollywolly hidden depths of my mind
brings forth tears
to the eyes
weeping the sad song
which plays in my heart
the song filled with sorrow
of pain and of hurt
making me want to just
cut
cut
cut
Up the ladder:
Egg Roll
Down the ladder:
Up.
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Posted: November 12, 2006 12:07 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2006 12:07 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9489 Comments:
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howl @ 81.179.127.249
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15-Nov-06/1:40 PM
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replace 'brings forth tears/ to my eyes' with 'brings forth tears/ to my bum'
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