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Golden Times (Free verse) by cpill I wish I was a pie-man
And lived by the sea
A pie-man gets to try one
And in the sea he gets to pee
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Posted: October 24, 2006 12:24 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2006 12:24 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6406 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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24-Oct-06/3:43 AM
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It is an unbreakable and universal law of poetry that you must always rhyme 'pie-man' with 'Simon', if you are to rhyme 'pie-man' at all.
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