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my memories (Free verse) by fiefofum digging a hole with my shovel
each sod coming out is replacd with a memory in
my life about to hide away
my box i place in, ontop of my memories
sod back on
will anybody ever find me?
what will they think?
Up the ladder:
The whole story
Down the ladder:
Fear
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Posted: October 11, 2006 4:53 PM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2006 4:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9081 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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12-Oct-06/1:20 AM
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Intriguing time capsule thoughts. Couple of typos.
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