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Solving Freud's Conflict (not a weather poem) (Senryu) by nypoet22
Later or sooner, spring bed, flower bed, we will all sleep together.

Up the ladder: leaving
Down the ladder: Portals to you

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5672
Posted: September 24, 2006 6:17 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2006 6:17 PM PDT
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[9] Dovina @ 12.72.44.205 | 24-Sep-06/7:40 PM | Reply
Freud has been a called a man with "a whole climate of opinion." - WH Auden. So you have written a Freudian weather poem. Admit its inevitability.

Death solves many conflicts, and our atoms mix eventually with those we hate. Best not to hate; maybe that's what you;re saying. Good poem.
[n/a] nypoet22 @ 65.10.92.48 > Dovina | 27-Sep-06/5:29 PM | Reply
thanks. it's a cute little pun but i tried to get all the mileage i could out of it. auden was a genius. freud was no slouch either, come to think, though most of the time he was coked off his hiney.
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 27-Sep-06/3:28 PM | Reply
Excellent.
[8] richa @ 81.179.135.216 | 29-Jan-07/1:04 PM | Reply
Cute.
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