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Ellipses (Concrete) by MacFrantic
......I...........know...........what you...want....to....be......but.....not who...........you............are......

Up the ladder: The Critic (Joke)
Down the ladder: Equivocal Rhyme.

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Weighted score: 4.4039855
Overall Rank: 12982
Posted: September 20, 2006 11:43 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2006 11:44 AM PDT
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[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.255.61 | 20-Sep-06/5:03 PM | Reply
You have shown promise here. But this is total ratshit.
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