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Rough & Ready (Free verse) by crims0ngh0st Incredibly tight
Pressure, stretching
Ripping and pulling
Tearing.
The
friction brings heat
hot & wet
burning inside
Yearning for more...
Harder, faster
Pounding, slamming
Terrorizing and pulverizing
Filling
full, opening wide
Fulfilled and satisfied
The pleasure is overwhelming
My senses are strained
Leaving me wanton for more.
Up the ladder:
Equivocal Rhyme.
Down the ladder:
Hair today
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.4022527 Overall Rank: 12984 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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30-May-02/7:40 PM
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cute but unimaginative.
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