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We shall sleep (Senryu) by Caducus
Find in me your dreams, and we shall sleep through darkness we shall sleep, till light

Up the ladder: Disturbances of air
Down the ladder: A Friend in the Night

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9273
Posted: August 16, 2006 2:43 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2006 2:43 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 12.72.43.6 | 16-Aug-06/3:15 PM | Reply
This is fuzzy, but I fail to see, in a real world, how a person can look for and find a dream. Dreams just happen without effort. Okay, you maen it some other way.
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