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Bury my memory (Free verse) by creepshow
Etched in, Burned and cinged in my flesh. My memory is tainted with the image of you. Haunting my running thoughts. Fear was my obstacle coming through, All my life one after another, you and you, this and that... Now when my blurred vision comes into realistic clarity, I shudder at the apparition that stares back, into me, my soul, it won't let go. Never, Ever. The image that feeds off of my emotions...

Up the ladder: the sweet smell of death
Down the ladder: A Simple Band of Metal

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9740
Posted: July 27, 2006 12:08 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2006 12:08 PM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 12.72.37.18 | 27-Jul-06/3:10 PM | Reply
It Won’t Stay Buried

Etched in my flesh,
burned in my brain,
tainted memory,
the image of you.

Haunting thoughts,
one after another,
you and you.


When blurred vision comes clear,
I shudder at the apparition,
staring back,
into me,
into my soul.

it won't let go.
Never,
Ever.
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