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hypnotic spell (Free verse) by the indign
come under this hypnotic spell with me; forget who you were and everything you know. we'll start again, from whence began, a fresh path lain ahead; take a stroll and watch the sky, get lost inside ourselves. a new air, crisp and clean, soothing all our sighs, breathing in perfection as the calm rests our weathered minds. so join me in this hypnotic spell; let's build something new. forget the past and look ahead to a brightness we never knew.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10567
Posted: July 21, 2006 2:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2006 2:03 PM PDT
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