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hypnotic spell (Free verse) by the indign come under this hypnotic spell with me;
forget who you were
and everything you know.
we'll start again, from whence began,
a fresh path lain ahead;
take a stroll and watch the sky,
get lost inside ourselves.
a new air, crisp and clean,
soothing all our sighs,
breathing in perfection
as the calm rests our weathered minds.
so join me in this hypnotic spell;
let's build something new.
forget the past and look ahead
to a brightness we never knew.
Up the ladder:
Break
Down the ladder:
Where's Jeremi B. Handrinos?
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Posted: July 21, 2006 2:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2006 2:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10568 185 view(s)
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