poemranker ::Sunny Day Gone (In Lovng Memory of My Mother) by fallen_rose

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Free verse № 144035

Sunny Day Gone (In Lovng Memory of My Mother)

Member since 2006 · Posted 21 Jun 2006 · 1 comment

She was not too far to see me She saw her last sunny day on her way to hold onto me Her last sunny day was gone by a blackout in her vision Her last sunny day was a day from hell to heaven with a flashing light from God to save her good life with his beautiful hands and a shining heart of care and hope Her sunny day was gone until she feels it from God and the people she loved always and forever Her sunny day will be up above us for the rest of our lives.

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[6] Zoe 10-Jul-06/4:19 AM Reply
Quite nice... I'd liek top hear more about your mother. What kind of person was she? What was teh story of her life?