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Sunny Day Gone (In Lovng Memory of My Mother) (Free verse) by fallen_rose She was not too far
to see me
She saw her last sunny day
on her way to hold onto me
Her last sunny day was gone
by a blackout in her vision
Her last sunny day
was a day from hell
to heaven
with a flashing light
from God
to save her good life
with his beautiful hands
and a shining heart
of care and hope
Her sunny day was gone
until she feels it
from God
and the people she loved
always and forever
Her sunny day
will be up above us
for the rest of our lives.
Up the ladder:
Covet
Down the ladder:
My Truth?
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Posted: June 21, 2006 12:40 AM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2006 12:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9774 Comments:
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Zoe @ 84.13.3.103
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10-Jul-06/4:19 AM
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Quite nice... I'd liek top hear more about your mother. What kind of person was she? What was teh story of her life?
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