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wet/dry dreams/eyes (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
I read a story in a book about a boy who hung a dream to dry.
Why so soaked? He wondered why. It came straight from his fears,
and was boiling in his tears creating steam around the room.
He woke up in a humidor, a sauna for his tomb.
Said "I dont know what makes the world so slanted, but
the axis tilted, planets wilted,
anecdotes dug holes and died.
I sang a song. I wonder why,
but I dont know what makes the sand so silty
when we wanted clay.
I thought perhaps another day
these pots could dry in the sun."
I shun the metaphor that dips its finger in my broth.
Tasting what i wanted soup and cinnamon, a flavor lost.
I think perhaps it's best to say I'm digging rather deep
to find a hole worth dying for beneath the other cheek.
But I read a simple poem by a girl about to die.
Why so soaked? Her tears were dry. They came straight out and seared
all the scars along her cheeks a uniformly blended pink.
She passed away one sunny day beneath the bathroom sink.
Said "I dont know what makes your view so slanted, but
the plants were wilting, and I was filthy.
And it soaked my folder through:
the song I sang. I wanted you,
but I dont know what makes the sky so empty
when we wanted clouds.
I thought perhaps if sung aloud
these words would never run."
I shun the simile that sticks its tongue into my tea.
Feeling what I wanted earl gray and lewd indecency.
I think perhaps it's best to say I'm reaching rather high
to find a hole worth dying for above my aching eye.
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Posted: June 14, 2006 11:00 PM PDT; Last modified: June 14, 2006 11:01 PM PDT
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