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little big rock (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
This crowded lonely rock
So much undesired
Too much Wreched
What to do what to do
So lonely
Why do we care for ourselves and no one else
Sickness plagues, kindness fades
In trouble in trouble
Too much ugly, too much sickness
Too much guilt, no answers
Nothing to do nothing to do
Too few beautiful words
There is not enough to move
Just a temporary vacation
A respite
Nothing to do nothing to do
Humans
We're all so guilty and jaded
A world of billions, yet so lonely
Self absorbed
Humans
Lyrical words of holiday, but not enough
Words of beauty and meaning, wasted on the hearing able
Words of beauty, not enough to save us all
Music
The justice league died
No one moral left, just a bunch of
US
On this lonely crowded rock
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10753
Posted: June 10, 2006 7:57 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2006 7:57 PM PDT
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