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"The Sound of the Blade" by Dark Moor (Lyric) by D. $ Fontera Lowering clouds in the sky aglow
Darken my shield of victory
Is my fate doomed to hell on earth?
A shift in the wind guides me to to home
I stare in the mirror now
Who is that under my bloody mail?
I bury my lance and I kneel on this field
I rend the air with my old sword
I commend my soul to God
I'm fatally hurt but not by a knight
When I hear the sound of the blade
I recall all the blood shed in vain
I bury my lance and I kneel on this field
I rend the air with my old sword
I commend my soul...
Wherever I turn my eyes I only see the lives
I shattered and they'll never find the path of the sun
Wherever I turn my head I only see the dead
I left behind, they'll never find the path of the sun
Up the ladder:
Satellite
Down the ladder:
Two Roses in a Jar
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Posted: May 30, 2006 10:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2006 10:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9190 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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1-Jun-06/5:07 AM
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Sort of Achilles' comprehending, but it feels very much like a gamer's poem (not a bad thing, by the way). The piece wasn't bad, but it's a dramatic poem in not-so-dramatic language. I just felt that it was the sort of poem which is designed to be over-written. Still fairly enjoyable.
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D. $ Fontera @ 172.192.31.102
> Ranger
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1-Jun-06/9:53 AM
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I didn't write this, it's just a post of one of my favorite lyrics ever. Dark Moor is a great band, and this ballad is very inspiring and very beautiful.
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
> D. $ Fontera
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1-Jun-06/9:56 AM
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Fair enough, I just assumed the title was a picture that you'd used as inspiration.
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