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have you ever (Free verse) by wordpainter
have you ever felt inadequate
have you ever felt as if no one cared
ever wondered what would happen if you ended it
have you ever felt unrequited in love
and every one knew how you felt even them
and no one cared
have you ever smiled for no reason
and loved the feeling of not knowing why but loving it
ever curled your toes in sand and giggled at the feeling
ahve you laughed unselfconciously at yourself
ecause you know that you deserve a good laugh
and your the only one there to laugh at
ever had an argument with yourself and lose?
ever hugged someone and feel for a moment as if you where in heaven
ever had butterfly kisses from your sister
or snuggled with your brother for a few sconds before he ran away
screaming ewww
have you ever cried for no reason wishing everything was different
have you ever been through the most agonizing break up
in the history of breakups
have you ever gone trough the day half asleep only to realize
that you have a test the next day and you didnt know
have you ever watched a movie thats made you cry
if you havn't
have you really ever lived?
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Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8841
Posted: May 25, 2006 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2006 2:38 PM PDT
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Have a comb through this for spelling and punctuation; the spellcheck on Word would pick out all the errors in here, I believe.
I suppose it stays fairly true to the title, but you'd do better to pick one of the images here (lines 7-8 or 9 would be good ones) and just write about that specific idea.
8 because you've had about a million views and no votes or comments yet.