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have you ever (Free verse) by wordpainter
have you ever felt inadequate have you ever felt as if no one cared ever wondered what would happen if you ended it have you ever felt unrequited in love and every one knew how you felt even them and no one cared have you ever smiled for no reason and loved the feeling of not knowing why but loving it ever curled your toes in sand and giggled at the feeling ahve you laughed unselfconciously at yourself ecause you know that you deserve a good laugh and your the only one there to laugh at ever had an argument with yourself and lose? ever hugged someone and feel for a moment as if you where in heaven ever had butterfly kisses from your sister or snuggled with your brother for a few sconds before he ran away screaming ewww have you ever cried for no reason wishing everything was different have you ever been through the most agonizing break up in the history of breakups have you ever gone trough the day half asleep only to realize that you have a test the next day and you didnt know have you ever watched a movie thats made you cry if you havn't have you really ever lived?

Up the ladder: Invasion
Down the ladder: More drugs.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8841
Posted: May 25, 2006 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2006 2:38 PM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 1-Jun-06/5:19 AM | Reply
In response to lines 1-22: 'no', and to line 24: 'yes'.

Have a comb through this for spelling and punctuation; the spellcheck on Word would pick out all the errors in here, I believe.
I suppose it stays fairly true to the title, but you'd do better to pick one of the images here (lines 7-8 or 9 would be good ones) and just write about that specific idea.

8 because you've had about a million views and no votes or comments yet.
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