Free verse № 141566
Sarah, Freefalling (twee for AlChemy)
My pink girl flies off the verge
of the world, all aplomb.
I stand numb, watch her surge
down the throat of the plunge.
She chases the sweeping cirrus clouds
that swirl like windflung feathers,
outraces the deepening shadow shroud
over white-faced hills, braver than her brothers.
The windâs loose grasp unfurls her,
spins her short curls to coronas,
shining, sunstreaking raspberry girl, her
long shadow streaming behind her, alone as
I, clinging frozen to this whitest of walls,
until her echoing laughter reminds me
how to fly off the rim in a glorious fall.
7 comments
Am I the first comment? Yay me. -10- + fave.
Reasonable crit if it weren't so petty and obviously prompted because I didn't cream over your little poeme. That's cool--if you can't take crits I won't bother offering any. Buhbye.
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