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portholes in a floating coffin (burial at sea)

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Mar 2006 · Edited 23 Mar 2006 · 1 comment

Galavant-she's falling down. She broke a stencil, melted crayons. All afloat amidst the séance. Falling down, sweet Galavant. So take a chance-she's calling out. And broke a pencil writing down a floating sentence since counfounded. Calling out, "sweet Galavant!"

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[5] Dovina 24-Mar-06/12:02 PM Reply
I thought Galivant might me some proper name, since otherwise it's just a varient of "gallivant", but found none. But since you misspelled confounded, I suppose that's all it is - a name you made up. If this is simply about a seance, I'm disappointed.