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portholes in a floating coffin (burial at sea) (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation Galavant-she's
falling down.
She broke a stencil,
melted crayons.
All afloat amidst
the séance.
Falling down,
sweet Galavant.
So take a chance-she's
calling out.
And broke a pencil
writing down a
floating sentence
since counfounded.
Calling out, "sweet
Galavant!"
Up the ladder:
finally i say goodbye
Down the ladder:
Do you see?
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Posted: March 23, 2006 10:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2006 10:29 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9079 Comments:
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Dovina @ 70.38.78.229
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24-Mar-06/12:02 PM
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I thought Galivant might me some proper name, since otherwise it's just a varient of "gallivant", but found none. But since you misspelled confounded, I suppose that's all it is - a name you made up. If this is simply about a seance, I'm disappointed.
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