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Journey of a broken heart (Free verse) by donmiguel1960
A broken heart travels alone
Surrounded by its very soul
All in the vessel of its spirit
Sailing in the darkness of the sea
No stars to plot a course by
Where has the dawn vanished to?
Thick gloom wrapping all
Covering the darkness of the night
Will the sun have the resolve?
Can its fire force back the shadows?
Winds from the heart churn the sea
Drawing the waves ever higher
The vessel is pitched to and fro
Structures pressed beyond all strength
The soul lifts its voice for help
Spirit and soul fearing for life
Troubled by the heart
Agitating the ocean deep
Intertwined with forces afar
Traversing the clapping waives
Distance has no measure
Jeopardy ever increases
Days have no time
Moments last evermore
Waives immerse the vessel
The Heart, endangering spirit and soul
Begging for a remedy
Knowing only one way out
As Jonah was lost in the sea
The heart must be let go
Begging to be released
Saving the very soul
Preserving even the spirit
Deaden even the heart
Yielding life to both spirit and soul
Jonah tossed from the ship
A sacrifice saving the vessel
Gaining the lives of the sailors
Save my spirit and soul
Sending overboard my heart
To the depths of the cold icy sea
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Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9120
Posted: July 3, 2004 12:46 AM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2004 12:46 AM PDT
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