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You Can Count On Friends (Free verse) by Ojiboch I've got a close friend named near
He likes to stick close and keep me from fear
Because of him I can live life to its best
Knowing my friend near will never stop nor rest
When I need help he's always there, ready to protect
me with the most loving care
He likes to stay close, this he and I know
And he has no fear he will never show
I can count on him in my life to always be near
Yet to this day he has yet to appear...
Up the ladder:
war
Down the ladder:
My Id and I
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Posted: September 10, 2002 4:33 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2002 4:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.1547556 Overall Rank: 13272 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 142.166.241.105
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18-Oct-02/1:57 PM
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Change it around, fer gawd's sake: make your best friend be fear. Then write a poem about that. It could even be amusing.
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Ojiboch @ 66.81.145.137
> Tintagiles
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23-Oct-02/5:53 PM
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My friend "near" isn't a real friend. This poem is about the comfort you have with close friends when they are near you. By me talking about "near" never appearing, it implies I have no close friends or no one can ever understand me.
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