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Free verse № 140275

letting go too much

by calliope

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Mar 2006 · 2 comments

All of me: Dishonesty. And you a dead reminder. So I watched my teeth rot one by one. I guess to pay the piper.

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[6] SupremeDreamer 7-Mar-06/8:36 AM Reply
Sounds like me and my relationship with methamphetamines... rotten teeth 'n payin for my piper.

Then again, perhaps my ability to relate to/comprehend your poem is miserably crippled.

Six.
[6] Dovina 7-Mar-06/12:13 PM Reply
The last line cliche is disappointment.