Poemranker [Poem: letting go too much] [by calliope] Thu Apr 25 02:17:36 PDT 2024

letting go too much (Free verse) by calliope

All of me: Dishonesty. And you a dead reminder. So I watched my teeth rot one by one. I guess to pay the piper.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10246

Posted: March 7, 2006 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2006 1:14 AM PST
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[6] SupremeDreamer @ 130.65.109.104 | 7-Mar-06/8:36 AM | Reply

Sounds like me and my relationship with methamphetamines... rotten teeth 'n payin for my piper.

Then again, perhaps my ability to relate to/comprehend your poem is miserably crippled.

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[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 7-Mar-06/12:13 PM | Reply

The last line cliche is disappointment.

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