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goddess of the harvest (Free verse) by calliope i hugged a girl with no bones today.
i guess she was deaf too to boot.
she pulled me in like a sunken ship.
and i lay like wreckage afoot.
her boyfriend
shot pellets of lead through his
flute.
to punish her for her cheating.
i hopped on an elevator
to arrive at his paramount.
where she once must have seen him.
i hugged that girl with no bones,
only cartilage. and coughed when
she finally released me.
she obviously didnt hear
the word i whispered into her ear.
"persephone"
Up the ladder:
pain like mine
Down the ladder:
Cock O Croo
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Posted: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6311 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
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4-Mar-06/4:27 PM
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Persephone was the daughter of Zeus and Demeter, abducted by Hades (Pluto) to be his wife in the lower world: identified with the Roman Proserpina. How is she goddess of the harvest? Otherwise, I like this.
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zodiac @ 66.230.117.198
> Dovina
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4-Mar-06/4:46 PM
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Um, mythologically. Her 9-month return to earth from Hades corresponds with the growing season. And Demeter is also a harvest-goddess.
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calliope @ 70.225.168.60
> Dovina
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7-Mar-06/1:11 AM
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i was referring to her seasonal return, of course, then i thought i'd throw pan in for good measure. that's where i really screwed it up.
Very odd.
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