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goddess of the harvest (Free verse) by calliope
i hugged a girl with no bones today. i guess she was deaf too to boot. she pulled me in like a sunken ship. and i lay like wreckage afoot. her boyfriend shot pellets of lead through his flute. to punish her for her cheating. i hopped on an elevator to arrive at his paramount. where she once must have seen him. i hugged that girl with no bones, only cartilage. and coughed when she finally released me. she obviously didnt hear the word i whispered into her ear. "persephone"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6308
Posted: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PST
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[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 4-Mar-06/4:27 PM | Reply
Persephone was the daughter of Zeus and Demeter, abducted by Hades (Pluto) to be his wife in the lower world: identified with the Roman Proserpina. How is she goddess of the harvest? Otherwise, I like this.
[n/a] zodiac @ 66.230.117.198 > Dovina | 4-Mar-06/4:46 PM | Reply
Um, mythologically. Her 9-month return to earth from Hades corresponds with the growing season. And Demeter is also a harvest-goddess.
[n/a] calliope @ 70.225.168.60 > Dovina | 7-Mar-06/1:11 AM | Reply
i was referring to her seasonal return, of course, then i thought i'd throw pan in for good measure. that's where i really screwed it up.
[8] ecargo @ 167.219.88.140 | 6-Mar-06/9:45 AM | Reply
Very odd.
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