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goddess of the harvest (Free verse) by calliope
i hugged a girl with no bones today.
i guess she was deaf too to boot.
she pulled me in like a sunken ship.
and i lay like wreckage afoot.
her boyfriend
shot pellets of lead through his
flute.
to punish her for her cheating.
i hopped on an elevator
to arrive at his paramount.
where she once must have seen him.
i hugged that girl with no bones,
only cartilage. and coughed when
she finally released me.
she obviously didnt hear
the word i whispered into her ear.
"persephone"
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6308
Posted: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2006 12:44 AM PST
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