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swimming (Free verse) by lexicon Night sea -- still against those swimming beneath
a playful moon,
withered away from hours relegated to water.
Once sad morning dawns we dress,
Minding the sunshiny sky.
Up the ladder:
my truth
Down the ladder:
Field of dreams
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Posted: May 10, 2002 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: November 14, 2002 12:53 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8305 Comments:
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limonade @ 207.179.148.152
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30-May-02/9:34 PM
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sunshiny isn't very poetic.
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