poemranker ::Nazca Soil by einekleine

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Lyric № 1388

Nazca Soil

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 2 comments

The groove runs deep in the plain Notched hard into groundsoil Some say it marks spacemen's lane Most think it badman's toil It is ancient and I trace it with my toe Thinking of the local fool Who did the same, and the same, years ago And I think of what fire-cool Burned in the heads of men who carved This curving snake into sheer rock Painfully made ground and halved Distance to who knows what Maybe the sailor asleep on the bar Stained with blue words and fresh designs Her faded first blurred scar Love's name, spoilt map, sea rhyme

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[9] anonymous 19-May-02/12:57 AM Reply
wonderful; like this:

Maybe the sailor asleep on the bar
Stained with blue words and fresh designs
[5] deleted user 10-Jun-02/12:56 AM Reply
a little bit vague. "fire-cool"?