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untitled (Free verse) by darby pyn
Approach with no control and let the scene form its emotion. face to face with contention. acknowledge with regard. be convincing. cradle their fragile ego with subservient poise and spit. split personality disorder. the sunshine glazes my name tag with business excrement. dying faces with dying lives force fetal composure with one finger up and two fingers crossed.

Up the ladder: love cycle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4255
Posted: September 8, 2002 4:26 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2002 4:26 PM PDT
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[9] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 4-Dec-03/10:23 AM | Reply
Do I know you? Darby?
[n/a] darby pyn @ 198.81.26.106 > Shardik | 15-Dec-03/9:20 PM | Reply
I go by scubasteve on another site.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > darby pyn | 17-Dec-03/12:11 PM | Reply
Oh, no wonder, so do I.
[9] blindwriter @ 219.47.92.54 | 3-Apr-05/11:06 PM | Reply
genius.
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