Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Untitled (Free verse) by frahj
Opulence is bliss Until you miss And piss On the golden toilet seat

Up the ladder: target
Down the ladder: Void and Vitality

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10239
Posted: January 21, 2006 7:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2006 7:12 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 23-Jan-06/4:30 PM | Reply
Raise the seat please, then lower it when finished. Thank you.
[7] zodiac @ 209.193.9.154 | 23-Jan-06/5:57 PM | Reply
Don't you have one of those guys in there with the towel and monkey-suit? No? What kind of opulence is that?
156 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001