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Everything is Nothing (Free verse) by Donne With Life
Vegetables lined up infinite in row, or perhaps stack If you prefer to not think time as linear Although, you can Never Know what hour Is it? One vegetable removed from infinite, for to snack On your tongue what breathes your lung Bit none but oxygen Nothing more Desolate than stomach sour On empty One over everything is point “oh!”, infinite on back Makes none define when all is done No times Infinity So makes No What is forever but one big “OH!”

Up the ladder: Pinhole
Down the ladder: castle of pandas part II.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6892
Posted: January 19, 2006 6:57 PM PST; Last modified: January 19, 2006 6:57 PM PST
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[6] ecargo @ 167.219.0.143 | 20-Jan-06/8:25 AM | Reply
nada y pues nada . . . but deliver us from nada . . .

[6] zodiac @ 209.193.9.151 > ecargo | 20-Jan-06/8:29 AM | Reply
Nice.
[5] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 20-Jan-06/1:56 PM | Reply
How much is infinity minus infinity? How about infinity minus 1?
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 20-Jan-06/2:40 PM | Reply
Here's a 10. Don't kill yourself.
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