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awakening (Free verse) by pollywolly
alone,
i,
a forlorn figure
stands,
gazing below
with cold glassy eyes upon the rising storm
of a wild autumn morn
cold and grey
i see her
as she rises
throwing her
wild untameable self upon
the once warm and golden shore
behind her
the mother of light
creases the horizon
desperately trying to cast
some warmth into my soul
she pierces her shadow upon me
a fallen child of her world
and gives to me
some hope
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Overall Rank: 8647
Posted: January 15, 2006 11:41 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2006 11:41 AM PST
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