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Blue (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
I looked at a blue flower today
I donât know the type, Iâm not good at that
It seemed like my first time
Maybe it wasâ¦
Though Iâve passed by them before
This time one spoke to me
HE spoke to me
He told me he was dying
He told me people have passed by,
countless times
whilst showing his most sincere grandeur
and looked to the stop sign instead;
or their friends, or their watch, or their day
He dropped a petal.
Before that I didnât know flowers could willingly do that
He said âyesâ
He told me he had no use
He dropped a few more
They fell to my shoe, orange like a tiger
I bent my head over to him,
scooting toward him a few steps to reach
I kissed his innermost self
And I whispered and told him,
âyou have use,
youâre beautiful to meâ
He stopped wilting to hear me out.
I told him I was sorry.
I told him,
even though I only noticed him now I was glad
because it made it so much more special.
I told him how much he added beauty;
to my street, to my neighborhood, to my world
I told him other people thought he was beautiful too
But were too afraid to say it
I told him I was afraid to say it before
And he gave me a look,
like he knew I meant what I said but was shocked,
shocked that I said it, or evenâ¦confessed
He stopped wilting
He gazed off to Nowhereland
I knew that lookâ¦
Our conversation ended.
More flowers grew after that.
They strew all over
I found Mary then,
my best friend to eternity
And the world found blue.
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Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7969
Posted: January 13, 2006 8:54 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2006 8:54 AM PST
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