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As we lay (Free verse) by rahson_s
Its morning, as we lay
A man's wife sits in worry,
Her hubby, dipping
In other women,
The finest flock
Of dimes, sharing
Time with each race,
Their faces differ in shade
Yet sex drives remain
In neutral, truly
ruling out charm
as an influence,
explosive sex, proven
signs of fulfillment,
hospitalized for
guilty pleasures
entertained in the
night, for my mother's
sake I protect
sickness from
family, sexual
fantasies defines me,
as we lay
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7833
Posted: December 28, 2005 8:40 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2005 8:40 AM PST
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