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Virgin (Free verse) by MacFrantic Loneliness
That calls me back
As I wonder what love is like
How can I write of two
When I know but one in this
Loneliness?
The touch
Wanting more in nothing
Than I ever wanted in everything
And hearing the atmosphere
Pulse with emotion
To write this
Is to lie
Is to wither within
And I am sick of it all
Up the ladder:
Spirit In a Temple
Down the ladder:
Beware of Cruel Poets
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Posted: December 28, 2005 2:24 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2005 2:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7359 Comments:
It's a lot like being a virgin, except that you get to have sex.
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statement, at least to me. Good basics here - needs spit and polish.