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My Christmas Gift (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
I walked to the tree, and smiled with glee,
For Santa left a gift for me.
Siting down next to the fire
Family around in nightgown attire.
I picked up my gift and read the card
It read "Someones gift, so big, so fine, It had to be left out in the
yard"
O my heart started racing, wondering what it could be
Maybe santa left a Bicycle for me.
I opened the door and ran outside
But my heart sank as i realized nothing was there,
Im not to sure but Santa lied.
My sulking face started to cry
I dragged my feet inside, tears dripping from my eyes
I heard a clank, I turned and looked
My eyes had been hooked!
It was my Bicycle'
O Santa, what a good tickle!
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10232
Posted: December 26, 2005 10:25 PM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2005 10:25 PM PST
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