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My Christmas Gift (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
I walked to the tree, and smiled with glee, For Santa left a gift for me. Siting down next to the fire Family around in nightgown attire. I picked up my gift and read the card It read "Someones gift, so big, so fine, It had to be left out in the yard" O my heart started racing, wondering what it could be Maybe santa left a Bicycle for me. I opened the door and ran outside But my heart sank as i realized nothing was there, Im not to sure but Santa lied. My sulking face started to cry I dragged my feet inside, tears dripping from my eyes I heard a clank, I turned and looked My eyes had been hooked! It was my Bicycle' O Santa, what a good tickle!

Up the ladder: Every Time
Down the ladder: Dedication

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10245
Posted: December 26, 2005 10:25 PM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2005 10:25 PM PST
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[6] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.67 | 29-Dec-05/6:35 AM | Reply
I'll echo the six. Read this aloud to yourself and you'll be able to fix it easily.
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