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P.S + Post Script (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
Laughter was ringing in my hears
As they put the rope around my neck
HANG HIM! she cried
Allusions forming in my mind
God! i cried. save me, save me
But all i heard was laughter
I turned and looked and saw a girl
I knew her quiet well in fact
Her hair shined with rays of fire
And her eyes glowed red
A hated the sight, and looked away
As the rope tightend i felt your hand
Your face was scricten with fear
I whispered in your ear before i died.
All i said was, i love you dear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9198
Posted: December 22, 2005 10:44 PM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2005 10:44 PM PST
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"scricten"? Maybe you mean scriven?