Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

P.S + Post Script (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
Laughter was ringing in my hears As they put the rope around my neck HANG HIM! she cried Allusions forming in my mind God! i cried. save me, save me But all i heard was laughter I turned and looked and saw a girl I knew her quiet well in fact Her hair shined with rays of fire And her eyes glowed red A hated the sight, and looked away As the rope tightend i felt your hand Your face was scricten with fear I whispered in your ear before i died. All i said was, i love you dear.

Up the ladder: Where could you be
Down the ladder: Bent and Broken Wings

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9294
Posted: December 22, 2005 10:44 PM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2005 10:44 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[7] zodiac @ 70.109.2.131 | 23-Dec-05/7:43 AM | Reply
The next time an allusion forms in your mind, write it down. It'll make your poetry more interesting.

"scricten"? Maybe you mean scriven?
253 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001