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P.S + Post Script (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Laughter was ringing in my hears As they put the rope around my neck HANG HIM! she cried Allusions forming in my mind God! i cried. save me, save me But all i heard was laughter I turned and looked and saw a girl I knew her quiet well in fact Her hair shined with rays of fire And her eyes glowed red A hated the sight, and looked away As the rope tightend i felt your hand Your face was scricten with fear I whispered in your ear before i died. All i said was, i love you dear.

zodiac 23-Dec-05/7:43 AM
The next time an allusion forms in your mind, write it down. It'll make your poetry more interesting.

"scricten"? Maybe you mean scriven?




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