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The Prince (Free verse) by elderking
you say how you love me (but your actions do not) you say you think of me (then promptly forgot) you claim being faithful (at least, never caught) you swear you're above lies (well, just the ones that I've bought) now you're screaming Don't change me (why change a Prince...if that's what I've got?)

Up the ladder: Born to hate you
Down the ladder: The Fire You Give

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8566
Posted: December 22, 2005 4:20 PM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2005 4:20 PM PST
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[8] celticskatermatt1 @ 68.8.219.40 | 22-Dec-05/10:46 PM | Reply
catchy
[6] zodiac @ 70.109.2.131 | 23-Dec-05/7:44 AM | Reply
Don't believe him. He's really a frog.
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