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a day of reparations (Free verse) by peaceseeker
yo brother,
of the trees,
of the skies.
embrace the cold..
back to nothing,
healing all.
"i love you,live,"
said the girl,to
the woman.
"a better day will come,"
she said to the girl.
"and so it is,"said the girl.
the cypher keeps rolling
yo sister
at peace, at heart.
dignified behind the line
you drew.
back to balance
healing,always healing
"i love to live,"
said the boy to
the man.
"regenerate love,"
he said to the boy.
"yes,"said the boy.
the cypher keeps rolling
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6764
Posted: December 21, 2005 9:31 AM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2005 9:44 AM PST
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This is really good, and it was discarded as lesser poems were praised. "dignified behind the line
you drew" is great.