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a day of reparations (Free verse) by peaceseeker
yo brother, of the trees, of the skies. embrace the cold.. back to nothing, healing all. "i love you,live," said the girl,to the woman. "a better day will come," she said to the girl. "and so it is,"said the girl. the cypher keeps rolling yo sister at peace, at heart. dignified behind the line you drew. back to balance healing,always healing "i love to live," said the boy to the man. "regenerate love," he said to the boy. "yes,"said the boy. the cypher keeps rolling

Up the ladder: You Pick It
Down the ladder: STAN

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6764
Posted: December 21, 2005 9:31 AM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2005 9:44 AM PST
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[9] Dovina @ 70.38.78.229 | 4-Sep-06/6:42 PM | Reply
You were done an injustice back in December.
This is really good, and it was discarded as lesser poems were praised. "dignified behind the line
you drew" is great.
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