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Trust Exercise (Free verse) by proteusplum
None of you knew where I really was
The day I fell back
And no-one caught me.
I was falling through clouds
Of your reassuring words, watching
How they dissipate up close like clouds.
Falling past your many fingers
Noting how they pointed
Straight down.
And I finished up flat
Upon my back, but rather that
Than in your hands.
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Posted: September 6, 2002 1:30 PM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2002 1:30 PM PDT
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