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Refund (Lyric) by Miggy
You criticized me for leaving Thinking I was doing the wrong thing It was for the best however For since then I’m feeling better My mind grew weary of your breath From your wanting pity for your near death Yet I stand up and firmly leave Since you never gave want I need (Chorus) I ask you kindly Refund me for the waste You were not my liking For the sour mood matched your face You may talk about it for many years To others who can tolerate their fear Yet I ask for a refund For I clearly had enough of your so-called love I sense happiness in your dismay Wanted to show this was not for play Yet I won’t ever give a damn Making sure it won’t happen again Between the lack of trust And the mocking of me wasn’t a plus Remember who gave the effort Before I saw what I had leave for (Chorus) Say what you must You free-eating days are over And hope the sense don’t rust When you become mentally sober (Chorus)

Up the ladder: fly me away
Down the ladder: I Need Not be Told

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12338
Posted: December 8, 2005 8:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 8, 2005 8:16 PM PST
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