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Derrick Holmes (Free verse) by rahson_s
Our only objective was to rid
The bodies of three women,
Two infants and one adult male,
Murdered by one handgun, all
Receiving one bullet to the head,
They were already drugged, all we had to do
Was pull the trigger, all the victims
Were Hispanic, only money
Would motivate us to do such a thing,
I have a cocaine addition worth more
Than human life, my partner the same,
He looked out while I did the shooting,
already high On that stuff it
wasn't as hard as I thought,
we Moved the bodies to the car
outside seating two Italian men,
money exchanged hands and we were
On our way to the spot, once there
our biggest fear Was awaiting, Freeze,
don't move, that was the last time
I was on the streets of Brooklyn,
I was Derrick Holmes
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Posted: November 22, 2005 2:08 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2005 2:08 PM PST
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we Moved the bodies to the car
outside seating two Italian
>>>
We packed the stiffs in the motor
Outside seating two butch mafiosos
-pardon the spelling-