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Right Now (Free verse) by Wulf
Right across the night you take them maybe to some other home Right across the night you make them maybe maybe never be alone Right across our hearts are breaking You have stolen a peace of days replaced them with a sorrow waking a voice a window a fading face Press your face against that window Tell me tell me what you see eyes come looking back to find you Tell me are they are they free Right now things aren't making sense Tell me all your death and lies Right now c'mon tell me tell me have you won that awful prize right now Right now how do you feel Right now how do you die Right now you've made a reign of tears Right now you have torn the sky Child lay your head down right now on my shoulder Over on your Earthen crib make a pillow pillow down It is night It is a cloud Child teach me teach me how to say goodbye right now

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7842
Posted: September 5, 2002 7:12 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 7:12 PM PDT
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