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rubble rooster (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
chop off my spaghetti with your limber limp fandoogle while i boil my peretti with the pages bookmarked noodles to our sillhouette encounter with the demons bees they buzz "like a fount upon the altar" will we pirouette asunder?


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8288
Posted: November 18, 2005 12:11 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2005 12:11 AM PST
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[9] zodiac @ 212.118.19.155 | 18-Nov-05/10:37 PM | Reply
Tread along, tread along, tread along, yeah.
You're like a stick of macaroni in bed.
Eat the ritual food, my friend,
So that your macaroni will be steady in bed.
Bling-blabling-bling-bling!

- Bunny Wailer
[n/a] FreeFormFixation @ 70.225.166.245 > zodiac | 23-Nov-05/3:52 AM | Reply
wow, i really like that. damn it, why cant i live in jamaica already? nice visit...and... i want to live there.
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