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Technology makes memories, photo album, circa 1970 (Free verse) by <~>
The shutter, sphhttt! done it
opened white borders
under PeelHere! prominent
where one waited, shaking
to see, pristine, Mom
in a pointy bikini and Dad's
Bermuda shorts, plaid
like disciplined fruit
and smiles that stayed
fixed to that day
when Will was still
with us and Ede
cut the cake with the sharpest knife
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Posted: October 24, 2005 11:22 AM PDT; Last modified: January 11, 2006 11:30 AM PST
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