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Technology makes memories, photo album, circa 1970 (Free verse) by <~>
The shutter, sphhttt! done it opened white borders under PeelHere! prominent where one waited, shaking to see, pristine, Mom in a pointy bikini and Dad's Bermuda shorts, plaid like disciplined fruit and smiles that stayed fixed to that day when Will was still with us and Ede cut the cake with the sharpest knife

Up the ladder: Easter
Down the ladder: Children of adults

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.333333
Weighted score: 5.397343
Overall Rank: 3190
Posted: October 24, 2005 11:22 AM PDT; Last modified: January 11, 2006 11:30 AM PST
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[7] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 29-Jan-06/6:17 AM | Reply
'Like a disciplined fruit'...yes, imaginative certainly.
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