|  |  | Technology makes memories, photo album, circa 1970 (Free verse) by <~>
 
 The shutter, sphhttt! done it 
opened white borders
under PeelHere! prominent 
where one waited, shaking
to see, pristine, Mom
in a pointy bikini and Dad's 
Bermuda shorts, plaid 
like disciplined fruit
and smiles that stayed
fixed to that day
when Will was still
with us and Ede 
cut the cake with the sharpest knife 
 
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