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Technology makes memories, photo album, circa 1970 (Free verse) by <~>

The shutter, sphhttt! done it opened white borders under PeelHere! prominent where one waited, shaking to see, pristine, Mom in a pointy bikini and Dad's Bermuda shorts, plaid like disciplined fruit and smiles that stayed fixed to that day when Will was still with us and Ede cut the cake with the sharpest knife

Ranger 29-Jan-06/6:17 AM
'Like a disciplined fruit'...yes, imaginative certainly.




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