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Questions (Free verse) by TLRufener
Did the Angel knock upon your door? Did they carry you away? When you looked into their eyes Did they option you to stay? What did I do To make them take you from me? Was it some mystical force That I cannot see? Is there an explanation, Or will I forever be in the dark? After everything we endured together This is leaving a horrifying mark. Could it have been your mistake That brought the Reaper to you side? Was it something you said Or just something that you couldn’t hide? Was it your plan all along; To leave me here alone? Or did you try to save yourself; But no one in heaven answered the phone? If someone would have been there Would you have known what to say? Would you have asked for forgiveness? Would you have been granted your wish to stay? Was it clearly unexpected, Or had you always secretly known? Did you ever think that in the end I would be the one that was alone? Did you lack the courage To face me with the truth? Did you ever once believe That the one that would be leaving was you?

Up the ladder: Stardust
Down the ladder: A Word to the Servant

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11668
Posted: October 22, 2005 6:59 PM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2005 6:59 PM PDT
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[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 25-Oct-05/7:15 AM | Reply
Answer: No and nothing.
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