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3rd Spartan Row (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Late black flowers
here;
arcing spears trace
bright half-
moons in the yellow sun.
Where aching chests
heave,
fall to breathe
little from suffering
holes, caught with blood.
Pretty dear loves
revenge.
She sings impassioned,
to hope for
those who come to call.
A heavy cloud
drags,
tears her down now.
Daggers gleam
to catch an eye.
Shouts revealing
voices,
unfamiliar and joyous.
It is lonely to realize
that she is alone.
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Weighted score: 4.976287
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Posted: October 21, 2005 4:39 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2005 4:39 PM PDT
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