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My Secret (Free verse) by Sway
Nobody knows that i'm a timid violet, and an audacious sunflower all at once... I am a mixture of ideas and beliefs Like Psyche, I face the extraordinary task of sorting and sifting seeds of thought. Like the flowers, I am struggling, growing, changing.... Searching for myself. Nobody knows what is best for me, just what they'd like for me. Nobody knows what I think and dream of. Nobody knows but me.

Up the ladder: Looking for someone

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8271
Posted: January 25, 2006 9:51 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2006 9:51 PM PST
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[n/a] god'swife @ 71.103.98.44 | 25-Jan-06/10:11 PM | Reply
Get rid of the pronouns and the words ending in 'ing'.

All at once a timid violet &
an audacious sunflower.
All at once a mixture of ideas & beliefs.
.....

When did Psyche have to sort & sift seeds?



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