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Free verse № 137593

My Secret

Member since 2006 · Posted 25 Jan 2006 · 1 comment

Nobody knows that i'm a timid violet, and an audacious sunflower all at once... I am a mixture of ideas and beliefs Like Psyche, I face the extraordinary task of sorting and sifting seeds of thought. Like the flowers, I am struggling, growing, changing.... Searching for myself. Nobody knows what is best for me, just what they'd like for me. Nobody knows what I think and dream of. Nobody knows but me.

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[n/a] god'swife 25-Jan-06/10:11 PM Reply
Get rid of the pronouns and the words ending in 'ing'.

All at once a timid violet &
an audacious sunflower.
All at once a mixture of ideas & beliefs.
.....

When did Psyche have to sort & sift seeds?