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How often? (Lyric) by little_big_nose
This is life what have I done Done to you to deserve this Mind games at point blank New ashes laden upon ancient scars Scars How often are the words in reach How often do we practice what we preach And how often do we separate our masters from the leash Why can’t I just let it go Put my world on someone else’s shoulders That was life, this is death Dime-a-dozen emotions clouding reality One dead man One precious revelation saves two lives Alive How often is the answer spelled O-U-T How often is faith a fabled doubt And how often do we truly know what we’re sorry about I’m sorry

Up the ladder: Driven
Down the ladder: Awakening

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10542
Posted: October 21, 2005 5:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2005 5:46 AM PDT
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[6] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 21-Oct-05/9:33 AM | Reply
Have you ever heard of the question mark? If you're going to be asking questions, it's the only way to go.
[1] Tintagiles @ 207.179.148.78 | 22-Oct-05/7:20 PM | Reply
'And how often do we separate our masters from the leash' -- what?
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